Prompt 1: Freedom | Word count: 1200
Words Exactly | Due Date: Jan 27, 2021
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Something has awakened me. A noise from my chamber, perhaps,
though I can see the room is empty. My body is drenched in sweat. My senses
filled with foreboding, like a premonition carried over from nightmare.
I was dreaming of being hunted. I don’t even know what that
means, to be hunted. I’m vaguely familiar with the term, from conversations
overheard during my shifts in the cooking chambers. In my dream, I was being
chased, threatened by someone unseen who intended to harm me in some unknown
way.
I know that hunting is a thing that’s done Outside. But only
a select few are ever allowed out.
There’d been talk last night about the Outside. Discussions around
the evening meal that must have stayed in my subconscious and trickled into my
dreams. People rarely speak about the Outside. It’s not taboo, it just isn’t
done. Even the stories of how we came to exist in this subterranean homeland are
mostly forgotten now.
And yet, I’ve heard more talk about Outside in recent days
than I have in all of my sixteen years. Whispered
suggestions that we’ve been fed on lies.
“Outside isn’t the dangerous place we’ve been given to
believe,” they said. “There’s freedom Outside, even if our Forefathers believed
otherwise, when they locked us all inside.”
“It’s been more than four generations. Hasn’t it been long
enough?”
I sit up in my bed, pushing these thoughts aside. The
sleeping chamber is empty and my sister is gone. I notice her chest is open,
the contents removed. Not just her everyday clothes, but her ceremonial dress
is gone, and her jewelry as well.
“Darie,” I think, “what have you done?”
Darie’s always been a rebel. A nonconformist, as Mother
would say. Yet, Darie is the one Mother
chose to take her place as the next faction leader when Mother eventually steps
down.
I have an idea where I will find Darie, though it seems
early for such a venture. I suspect she will have gone to the same place I followed
her yesterday; an unused section of the subterranean where I found a surprising
number of people gathered.
“We know there are others living Outside,” a man had shouted
from the front of the crowd. “We know this to be true. Why do we allow
ourselves to be trapped inside this subterranean land? Why shouldn’t we be
allowed to experience life Outside?”
They crowd had grown more agitated as the gathering continued.
They were riled up and edgy when the meeting adjourned. I hoped Darie knew what
she was getting into, and not just following a group of dissidents for the sake
of having something different and exciting to do.
I dress quickly in a loose tunic and snug leggings, soft
soled shoes for my feet. I don’t bother trying to tame my hair, just pull it
back into a loose knot as I hurry from the chamber.
The place is a bustle of activity, a typical morning for
most of the faction. Here in the main passage there’s a constant stream of
people, moving in the direction of the eating chambers or the washing pools. They’re
going in the opposite direction, paying little attention to me as I pass them
on my way to the meeting place my sister led me to yesterday.
After traversing several long passages, I finally reach a
narrow path that leads down into a level of the subterranean that’s rarely
used. I grab up a lit torch when I reach the end of normal living space, before
moving deeper into this unused network of caves.
I hear murmurs of speech as I approach the innermost
chamber. Torches have been set in notches in the wall, so I extinguish mine
before taking several steps into the room. Pressing myself against the rough
wall inside a small alcove, I blend in with the semi-darkness.
Voices are raised in excited agitation. I can tell that something
is about to happen. It takes but a moment for my eyes to adjust to the dim
light. The impatience I hear in the crowd is reflected in the restless way the people
are fidgeting, shifting from foot to foot, barely constrained as all eyes fix
on a point along the southern wall.
That’s when I see my sister, standing at the wall, dressed
in her ceremonials. Two women in similar attire stand beside her. Before them is
the man who spoke at the meeting yesterday, also dressed in official costume.
“Oh, Darie,” I think again, “what are you doing?”
“The time has come to take back our freedom,” the man calls
in a voice loud enough for all to hear. “The time has come to act.”
He motions to the women, who respond by turning to face the
wall, raising their arms high above their heads, taking hold of something I
can’t make out. Whatever it is causes their muscles to strain with effort as they
pull it down towards themselves. I don’t understand the purpose of their
actions.
But in the next moment, I do understand, and the foreboding
I felt when I awoke this morning suddenly flares to life in my mind. Light is
penetrating our sanctuary from Outside.
My sister is opening a forbidden door, tricked into thinking
there is freedom Outside.
The light is gradual at first as the door rises slowly, until
the women gain momentum and the door rises faster. Higher. Blinding light shines
through the doorway, shattering the darkness of the subterranean sanctuary that
is my home.
Beyond the brightness of the doorway is the Outside, exposed
for the first time in more than a hundred years.
The crowd has become alive with excitement and feverish
curiosity. They shield their eyes and press in on one another to gain better
vantage with which to see.
Seven armed warriors, silhouetted against the brilliance of
the Outside stand there, waiting, as if they knew this door would open at this
time. Rushing in with maddening cries, with long, wicked blades, they begin wounding
and killing my people.
The people start
yelling in fear.
I go berserk with anger and frantic energy. I put aside my
fear and push my way into the melee of slaughter, past the people who allowed
this terror into our subterranean home. Somehow I am able to forge a path to
the southern wall where my sister had been and make my way to the mechanism she
had operated when she opened the door.
Darie and the two women are lying grotesquely in a pool of blood.
They would have been the first to be killed by the warriors, stabbed and
trampled and left behind. My heart aches for Darie, but I can spare her no
thought. I can see the mechanism that opened the door, can see that there are
three. Even if I can manage one, which I doubt, since I’m not nearly as tall as
my sister, I can only work one at a time. Will I be alive to work a second?
At least I will die trying.