Friday, February 19, 2021

Outside

 



Prompt 1: Freedom | Word count: 1200 Words Exactly | Due Date: Jan 27, 2021

 

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 Something has awakened me. A noise from my chamber, perhaps, though I can see the room is empty. My body is drenched in sweat. My senses filled with foreboding, like a premonition carried over from nightmare. 

I was dreaming of being hunted. I don’t even know what that means, to be hunted. I’m vaguely familiar with the term, from conversations overheard during my shifts in the cooking chambers. In my dream, I was being chased, threatened by someone unseen who intended to harm me in some unknown way.

I know that hunting is a thing that’s done Outside. But only a select few are ever allowed out.

 There’d been talk last night about the Outside. Discussions around the evening meal that must have stayed in my subconscious and trickled into my dreams. People rarely speak about the Outside. It’s not taboo, it just isn’t done. Even the stories of how we came to exist in this subterranean homeland are mostly forgotten now.

 And yet, I’ve heard more talk about Outside in recent days than I have in all of my sixteen years.  Whispered suggestions that we’ve been fed on lies.

 “Outside isn’t the dangerous place we’ve been given to believe,” they said. “There’s freedom Outside, even if our Forefathers believed otherwise, when they locked us all inside.”

“It’s been more than four generations. Hasn’t it been long enough?”

 I sit up in my bed, pushing these thoughts aside. The sleeping chamber is empty and my sister is gone. I notice her chest is open, the contents removed. Not just her everyday clothes, but her ceremonial dress is gone, and her jewelry as well.

 “Darie,” I think, “what have you done?”

 Darie’s always been a rebel. A nonconformist, as Mother would say.  Yet, Darie is the one Mother chose to take her place as the next faction leader when Mother eventually steps down.

 I have an idea where I will find Darie, though it seems early for such a venture. I suspect she will have gone to the same place I followed her yesterday; an unused section of the subterranean where I found a surprising number of people gathered.

 “We know there are others living Outside,” a man had shouted from the front of the crowd. “We know this to be true. Why do we allow ourselves to be trapped inside this subterranean land? Why shouldn’t we be allowed to experience life Outside?”

 They crowd had grown more agitated as the gathering continued. They were riled up and edgy when the meeting adjourned. I hoped Darie knew what she was getting into, and not just following a group of dissidents for the sake of having something different and exciting to do.

 I dress quickly in a loose tunic and snug leggings, soft soled shoes for my feet. I don’t bother trying to tame my hair, just pull it back into a loose knot as I hurry from the chamber.

 The place is a bustle of activity, a typical morning for most of the faction. Here in the main passage there’s a constant stream of people, moving in the direction of the eating chambers or the washing pools. They’re going in the opposite direction, paying little attention to me as I pass them on my way to the meeting place my sister led me to yesterday.

After traversing several long passages, I finally reach a narrow path that leads down into a level of the subterranean that’s rarely used. I grab up a lit torch when I reach the end of normal living space, before moving deeper into this unused network of caves.

 I hear murmurs of speech as I approach the innermost chamber. Torches have been set in notches in the wall, so I extinguish mine before taking several steps into the room. Pressing myself against the rough wall inside a small alcove, I blend in with the semi-darkness.

 Voices are raised in excited agitation. I can tell that something is about to happen. It takes but a moment for my eyes to adjust to the dim light. The impatience I hear in the crowd is reflected in the restless way the people are fidgeting, shifting from foot to foot, barely constrained as all eyes fix on a point along the southern wall.

 That’s when I see my sister, standing at the wall, dressed in her ceremonials. Two women in similar attire stand beside her. Before them is the man who spoke at the meeting yesterday, also dressed in official costume.

“Oh, Darie,” I think again, “what are you doing?”

 “The time has come to take back our freedom,” the man calls in a voice loud enough for all to hear. “The time has come to act.”

 He motions to the women, who respond by turning to face the wall, raising their arms high above their heads, taking hold of something I can’t make out. Whatever it is causes their muscles to strain with effort as they pull it down towards themselves. I don’t understand the purpose of their actions.

But in the next moment, I do understand, and the foreboding I felt when I awoke this morning suddenly flares to life in my mind. Light is penetrating our sanctuary from Outside.

 My sister is opening a forbidden door, tricked into thinking there is freedom Outside.

 The light is gradual at first as the door rises slowly, until the women gain momentum and the door rises faster. Higher. Blinding light shines through the doorway, shattering the darkness of the subterranean sanctuary that is my home.

 Beyond the brightness of the doorway is the Outside, exposed for the first time in more than a hundred years.

 The crowd has become alive with excitement and feverish curiosity. They shield their eyes and press in on one another to gain better vantage with which to see.

 Seven armed warriors, silhouetted against the brilliance of the Outside stand there, waiting, as if they knew this door would open at this time. Rushing in with maddening cries, with long, wicked blades, they begin wounding and killing my people.

The people start yelling in fear.

 I go berserk with anger and frantic energy. I put aside my fear and push my way into the melee of slaughter, past the people who allowed this terror into our subterranean home. Somehow I am able to forge a path to the southern wall where my sister had been and make my way to the mechanism she had operated when she opened the door.

 Darie and the two women are lying grotesquely in a pool of blood. They would have been the first to be killed by the warriors, stabbed and trampled and left behind. My heart aches for Darie, but I can spare her no thought. I can see the mechanism that opened the door, can see that there are three. Even if I can manage one, which I doubt, since I’m not nearly as tall as my sister, I can only work one at a time. Will I be alive to work a second?

 At least I will die trying.


Monday, December 14, 2020

GrammaLou

 Short Story Prompt 12: Hyped | Wordcount: 1200 words exactly | Deadline: 2 December 2020

Continuation of  In The Garden of Eden and Into the Dark

 


 
Gramma Louise was asleep when Gigi let herself into the darkened room. Her grey hair was like a wispy halo around her wrinkled face, giving her a fairylike appearance that Gigi adored. She sat in the chair beside the bed, taking the elder woman’s hand in her own. She was surprised at how warm it was, like she was lit by an internal glow that radiated from her heart to her fingertips. 
  
GrammaLou would laugh at Gigi’s thoughts. Her eyes would twinkle, and she would encourage the teenager to make up little stories about fairies and elves. Gigi remembered GrammaLou dubbing herself Gigi’s fairy godmother, claiming that Gigi was her little princess, left under a mushroom to be raised by the heroes of the realm. 
  
Gigi’s eyes misted, thoughts of her first foster parents inevitably filling her mind. They were the heroes GrammaLou referred to. She barely remembered them. What memories she had were formed mostly from GrammaLou’s photographs and the stories she'd told Gigi after Jack died and Brenna left. 
  
Gigi scanned the room for the beloved photo album, finding it in the bookshelf by the shuttered window. Gently laying GrammaLou’s warm hand on the bed, she rose and retrieved the book of memories, returning to her seat. She remembered the photo album being much larger and heavier. She supposed it must have seemed huge to her six year old self, sitting in GrammaLou’s lap and turning the pages when prompted. 
  
GrammaLou stirred slightly as Gigi clicked on the bedside lamp, nestling deeper into her pillow and snoring softly. 
  
Gigi opened the album, unprepared for the rush of emotions that overtook her. The first page had only a hand written note. “Her name is Georgette, but I call her Gigi. Please take care of her. And tell her I love her.”
 
She traced the note with her finger, wondering about the woman who wrote it. About how and why she could abandon her baby as she had.
 
Finally, she turned the page. There was a picture of Jack, wearing his fireman’s uniform, beaming down at the baby girl in his arms. Next came a series of nine photographs of her, posed in the same spot on that old ratty couch. A small chalk board displayed the number of months since her estimated birth. 
 
Here she was on her first birthday, propped up inside the front wheel of the firetruck just at the golden hour of sunset.
  
She turned the page and her chest constricted with bittersweet pain. She was three when this picture was taken. There was Engine 29, all shiny and clean in the background, next to the Station 52 sign where she’d been left by a mother no one knew. Brenna had become her mother, Jack her father. In this photo she was holding their hands, dancing on tippy-toes, dressed in a gauzy pink princess outfit, a huge smile on her impish face. There was Brenna, proud and beautiful in her paramedics’ uniform. Jack, handsome and tall in his fireman suit. GrammaLou stood next to her son, her hair grey and wispy even then. 
  
It was the only family picture they’d taken. The last picture of Jack before he died. There were a few more photos of her and Brenna, before her foster mother abandoned her, just as her real mom had.
 
Bitterness tried to take hold of her heart, but GrammaLou’s early teaching took over, and she let it go before it could take root.
  
The remaining pages were filled with pictures of her and GrammaLou. Here she was dressed for Halloween as Pippi Longstocking. This one at a kindergarten recital. The last page held ticket stubs from their trip to Disneyland, along with a snapshot of her and GrammaLou, grinning in matching Minnie Mouse ears. 
  
She smiled past the lump in her throat. Those were good days, she thought. The best. Just before the Parkinson’s disease became so bad GrammaLou couldn’t care for Gigi anymore. 
  
“Georgette? What a nice surprise.” GrammaLou’s voice was crackly with sleep. She rolled onto her side, propping her head in her hand and smiling like it was Christmas and all the gifts were for her. “How did you get here? Oh, but look at you, you’re crying.” 
  
Gigi sniffed, swiped her forearm across her face, blinking rapidly to clear the wayward tears. “It’s nothing. Just taking a trip down memory lane.” 
  
“But, how did you get here? I thought you moved out of state?” 
  
“Yeah, that didn’t work out so much. They fought all the time and ended up getting divorced. I’m with another family now, but I can’t say it’s any better.” 
  
“Why ever not?”  
 
“Oh, you know. The dad drinks all the time, mom’s having an affair. Us older kids are left to watch the younger ones and expected to do all the cleaning and cooking. I know I could ask to be placed somewhere else, but it’s not too bad, really, and anyway, now I’m just a bus ride away from you.” 
 
“Are you old enough to ride the bus by yourself?”
 
“I’m sixteen, GrammaLou. Old enough, don’t you think?” Gigi rose and sat on the bed beside the older woman, kissing her cheek and hugging her gently. “I’ve missed you.” 
  
“And I, you. I think of you all the time. My little princess growing up without a protector. It’s just not fair, is it?” 
  
“Of course it’s not. But you taught me that life isn’t fair, and we just have to…” 
  
“…make the best with what we’re given!” They laughed, finishing the sentence together. 
  
“So,” GrammaLou caught Gigi’s hand in her own and gave it a squeeze, “what has life given you, that you can make the best with?” 
  
Gigi ran her fingers across the back of GrammaLou’s hand, tracing the veins and caressing the knuckles, giving the question serious consideration. “Well, I like the new school I’m going to. They’re getting ready for basketball tryouts, and I’m hoping I get picked for the team.” 
  
“Of course you’ll get picked. Are you any good at it?” 
  
“You bet I am! I can shoot a hoop from mid court. I never miss from the foul line. I dribble fast, I pass real well, and I can steal the ball from the best of the best. ” 
  
“You must really enjoy playing basketball! Look at you; you’re all lit up just talking about it,” GrammaLou’s smile was infectious. Gigi found herself smiling back. 
 
“I get hyped just thinking about it! I was on the basketball team at my last school, and it was like... I was part of something. Like, I belonged, you know? I’ve never really fit in anywhere, and I don’t make friends easily, but none of that matters when I’m playing basketball, surrounded by my teammates and cheered on by the crowd. Oh, I hope I make the team!”
 
“Of course you will! As your fairy godmother, I will it to be so!”
 
Gigi could almost see pixie dust floating in the air at GrammaLou’s proclamation. As GrammaLou took hold of Gigi’s hands, warmth transferred from her fingertips into Gigi’s soul, like a transfusion of confidence and love that filled her heart to the brim.

Into the Dark

 Short Story Prompt 11: Area 52 | Wordcount: 500 words exactly | Deadline: 4 November 2020

 Prequel to In the Garden of Eden



 
 
Icy rain pelts Allie, soaking her clothes, dripping from her hair in rivulets down her face. Beneath her sodden coat, the baby mews in equal misery.
 
Street lights are just coming on, illuminating the rain. The street is empty, save for a pizza delivery car, pulling into a driveway at the end of the road. God, what she wouldn’t give for a piece of pizza.
 
She trudges on with dogged determination, until arriving at her destination, shivering from the cold. Kevin’s car is in the open garage, filling her with conflicting feelings of dread and hope.
 
Plucking up her courage, she climbs the steps and raps loudly on the front door.
 
After a few moments, the porch light comes on and Mrs. Langley opens the door. She peers at Allie with scornful recognition. “Kevin,” the elderly lady shouts, turning away dismissively, leaving Allie to wait outside, “it’s for you.”
 
Allie unbuttons her coat and lifts the crying baby from the harness. She hugs her to her chest, feeling as helpless as the child, with no means to feed and change her, to provide warmth and or even dry clothes.
 
“Oh, it’s you,” Kevin says, with an unfriendly scowl. “Go away, Allie. You shouldn’t be here.”
 
“Please, Kevin. We need help. I can’t keep her, and she’s your daughter.”
 
“Bullshit! I’m not the father. I was at the party that night. I saw you flirting with those guys. The brat could be any one of theirs.”
 
The cruelty in his voice is sharp, it tears at her heart like a serrated knife. It hurt almost as much as it had when those guys had held her down, taking turns raping her. She’d been eight weeks pregnant. Kevin’s response had been more painful when she went to him afterwards, expecting help and support rather than accusations of betrayal.
 
“I can’t help you, Allie. Maybe you can find safe haven at Area 52. They take abandoned babies there, no questions asked.”
 
He slams the door in her face and turns the porch light off. A moment later, the garage door closes as well.
 
Wrenching sobs tear through her chest and she eases down to the porch, rocking the baby and unbuttoning her blouse. She’s shaking uncontrollably, from cold, hunger, and desperation. She presses the babe to her breast, though her milk dried up last night.
 
“Oh, Georgette! I’m sorry, baby. I’m so sorry, Gigi.”
 
Allie longs for her mother, for her warm arms to wrap around her and tell her she isn’t alone. But Mom’s been dead these past three years, and Allie is alone.
 
She thinks of her dad, whom she loves dearly, but recalling his extreme disapproval when she told him she was pregnant, and his stern disappointment in his sixteen-year-old daughter, she just can’t face him yet. How could he forgive her, if she can’t even forgive herself?
 
Blinded by tears, by irrational thoughts, Allie pushes herself to her feet, straps Gigi into the harness, and flees into the night.

In the Garden of Eden

 Short Story Prompt 10: What I wish I said… | Wordcount: 1500 words exactly | Deadline: 7 October 2020




To enhance your reading experience, play this Link as you read the story: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UIVe-rZBcm4
 
It was the stench that first assaulted George’s senses as he locked the car and walked the short distance towards the homeless camp. This camp was far worse than the other two he’d been at recently, chasing rumors and leads that he desperately prayed would reunite him with his estranged daughter.
 
Dozens of makeshift tents and cardboard shelters formed the camp. It had a relaxed, party atmosphere about it, though it was dank and dark here under the highway overpass.
 
God! How could people live like this? Could Allie really be here? His heart ached at the thought of his daughter living in these conditions, rather than putting aside the hurt or the pride that kept her from coming home.
 
As always, when he thought of Allie, their last moments together replayed like a movie scene, etched forever in his mind.
 
She, barely fifteen, sitting on the couch with hands held protectively on her belly, mascara tears staining her cheeks. He, standing over her in a rage, responding badly to the news of her condition, uttering those words he’d do anything to take back.
 
“I thought we raised you to have more self-respect than to give yourself to the first boy who came along. What would your mother think? You’re just a goddamned baby yourself, and now you think you’re gonna raise one? I’m so disappointed with you. Get up to your bedroom. I can’t look at you right now.”
 
What would Mandy have thought of him, castigating their only daughter at a time when she was clearly frightened and most in need of his support? His wife would have been so disappointed in him, but she would have smoothed things over before Allie ran away.
 
In A Gadda Da Vida pulsated loudly from a silver boom box outside one of the larger tents. Thinking of Mandy, he remembered how she had loved dancing to this song, especially this full, seventeen minute rendition. The tune drowned out the rumble of cars and trucks that sped down the highway overhead.
  
Unkempt men and women loitered alone or in small clusters, some grooving to the beat of the music, others too stoned to care what went on around them. Diaper-less babies lay on dirty blankets, while scraggly children ran about in wild abandon, heedless of the poverty and the filth that surrounded them.
 
These people might live in squalor, he thought, but at least they were together. 
 
Cigarette and marijuana smoke hung thick in the air along with the smoke of smoldering cook fires. It masked the scent of unwashed bodies and dirty clothes, of soiled diapers thrown into a pile beside a makeshift toilet. An overflowing trash can had fallen on its side, rotten food and other debris strewn about, where scrawny dogs foraged and snapped at each other.
 
As Gunnery Sergeant in the US Marines, he took offense at such living conditions. He instinctively wanted to start barking commands at these people and attempt to bring order to their camp. Instead, he schooled his expression to keep the distaste from showing on his face, though from the way the crowd around him reacted to his presence, he guessed he wasn’t fooling anyone.
 
Or perhaps it was his powerful build, the desert camos he wore, his short cropped hair, or his rigid posture that put them on edge.
 
He watched them watching him as he approached, cautious curiosity in their expressions. Pulling a photo from his shirt pocket, he held it out to the group of people at the nearest tent.
 
“I’m looking for my daughter. I heard she might be here.” He spoke quietly, hoping it would ease the tension, though he was anything but calm, this close to the possibility of finding his Allie.
 
One of the women took the photograph from him, scrutinized it carefully. She shook her head and passed it on to the man beside her.
 
“Have you seen her?” His voice cracked with emotion. “She’ll be older now. This was taken on her fifteenth birthday, but she’ll be seventeen now. She might have a baby,” George said, uncertainly, “about eighteen months old?”
 
Others had joined the group as the photo was passed around. Some of the children came to see what was going on. 
 
One girl in particular caught his attention. She looked to be about ten, and she reminded him of Allie when she was that age. His throat constricted at the memory of his daughter, snuggled in his lap, solemnly promising to never grow up or forget who loved her best. She’d been so loving back then, so trusting. Not yet intimidated by his imposing demeanor, or his demand for proper behavior. 
 
He remembered the way she’d smelled that day, of green-apple hair detangler and Heaven Scent perfume. Stark contrast to this filthy, homeless girl who pushed her way through the crowd to peer at the photo. 
 
“That’s Allie!” she said, and it was as if a jolt of lightning ran through his body at the sound of her name. “She doesn’t feel very good today. Did you come to make her feel better?”
 
“Where?” George could barely speak. It felt as if his breath had bottled up inside his chest. He forced himself to be calm, clinging to the hope that he had found her at last. That she would be okay. “Where is she?”
 
That’s when he saw the clothesline strung between two tents, a pair of jeans and a cherry-red tee shirt left hanging to dry. The sight of the shirt set off a flurry of butterflies inside his stomach. His heart began beating erratically. He would recognize that shirt anywhere. It had the words ‘Hot Chick’ emblazoned in gold letters beneath the image of a yellow baby chick. Mandy had bought it for their daughter’s thirteenth birthday, just months before the cancer stole her life. It had been Allie’s favorite shirt. She’d worn it at least once a week. To see it here, now, four years later, was a blow he hadn’t expected. 
 
All the words he wanted to say to Allie swelled in his heart as he ran to the tent.
 
Not ‘where have you been’ and ‘why have you stayed away;’ but ‘God, how I’ve missed you,’ and ‘I’m sorry I drove you away.’
 
Recriminations were for later. For now he just wanted to hold her and tell her how much he loved her, and to beg her to please, please come home.
 
But the words died, unspoken, when he flung aside the tent flap and saw his daughter for the first time in almost two years. 
 
She was lying on her stomach, as if sleeping. Her right hand pillowed her cheek. Long, dark hair covered her pale face, left arm flung out in careless repose. Her forearms were covered with old scabs and weeping abscesses. A bright red puncture wound showed beneath a tourniquet still wrapped at her elbow, hypodermic needle fallen to the dirty mattress beside her emaciated, unmoving body. 
 
All sense and sensation receded as he fell to his knees beside her. Only an anguished, silent scream filled his mind, until a moment later sound returned, bringing the psychedelic guitar strings of In A Gadda Da Vida transitioning to mind numbing drum solo.
 
“Is there a phone nearby?” he shouted, pulling his daughter into his lap. “Somebody call 911.”
 
She coughed when he moved her, eyes blinking open, unfocused. She barely weighed anything. Her skin was cold and clammy. Her breathing shallow and labored. He swept her hair out of her face, and her eyes opened again. This time she looked at him directly. Her pupils were constricted to mere pinpricks.
 
“Daddy?” Her voice was a bare whisper, the word full of love and longing and fear.
 
“I’m here, Allie. I won’t leave you.”
 
“I’m sorry, Daddy. I’m so sorry.”
 
“Shhh, baby. Shhh. Don’t try to speak.”
 
“I gave my baby away, Daddy. I couldn’t keep her.”
 
Her breathing became more erratic and her eyes closed. Her body went limp in his arms.
 
He rocked her back and forth. “Stay with me, Allie. Don’t leave me again.”
 
Light filtered in through the tent flap as a woman stooped down to peer into the cramped space. “An ambulance is on the way,” she said. “It’ll be here soon.”
 
Allie’s fingertips had gone blue as George held her, weeping and willing help to come, though he knew it wouldn’t arrive in time. 
 
The drum solo ended and the last lines of In A Gadda Da Vida was crooning over the stereo.
 
The lyrics were simple. He knew them by heart, having sung them often to Mandy. “Oh won’t you come with me, and take my hand. Oh, won’t you come with me and walk this land. Please take my hand.”
 

Allie breathed her last as the song ended. She would never take his hand again. But maybe she would be with Mandy, in the Garden of Eden that Iron Butterfly had been too drunk to pronounce. 

Identity Crisis


Prompt: Jealous of... | Word count: 1250 words exactly | Due Date: Sept 9, 2020

 
I was always jealous of Jana. Beautiful, gregarious, spontaneous Jana. She could walk into a room and it was like a light turned on in the dark. She gloried in the attention. Sought it out like a moth to a flame. 
 
The boys always flirted with her, unable to take their eyes off her gorgeous face, her wide smile, her blue-green eyes. Even before she grew into her hourglass figure, they fought over her attention. They went out of their way to open doors for her, or carry her books to class. They called her on the phone and asked her out on dates. They took her to the skating rink or the school dances; and when we got older, to movies or the pool hall for a beer and some foos ball.
 
I never understood why I couldn’t attract the same kind of attention as she did. I look in the mirror and I see her face. The blue-green eyes, the wide smile, the blond hair. We share the same dimple, the same curvaceous body. I mean, we’re identical twins, for goodness sake.
 
But we’re as different as night and day.
 
My therapist has helped me to see that the difference is not a reflection of the outer image, but rather of what's on the inside. I don’t think of myself as the pretty girl I see in the mirror. That image belongs to Jana. Rather, I think of myself as a mouse, scuttling into dark corners and hiding in the walls, fearful of being seen, of being noticed. I struggle with the attention, with being mistaken for Jana.
 
It’s always been this way. When we were small, Daddy only had eyes for Jana. He’d come home from work and she’d run to meet him at the door, arms up-stretched. He’d grab her up in his strong arms and swing her around and around, laughing at her squeals of delight. He’d throw her on the couch and tickle her until she begged him to stop.
 
Me? I was always under the table, playing in my fort, or at the back of the kitchen stacking Tupperware. By the time Daddy was done playing with Jana, he was kissing Mom and asking for a beer. He never looked for me or asked after me, and by the time I climbed out of my fort, or put my toys or my books away, he’d be watching TV or reading the paper.
 
He made me feel like I was invisible. Like I didn’t even exist.
 
I tried talking with Jana about this, but she just scoffed at me, even though I insisted it was true.
 
“Of course it’s not true, Jennifer,” Jana said. “Tomorrow, when Daddy comes home, you run to meet him at the door. You'll see. He loves you as much as he loves me.”
 
But the next day, when Daddy came home, there I was, with my arms up-stretched. He picked me up, twirling me around and around until I got dizzy. “My pretty Jana,” he smiled into my eyes, and threw me on the couch, pressing kisses on my forehead and nose. I didn’t correct him, and he didn’t ask for Jennifer, never looked around to see where his other daughter was.
 
It was as if he had only one.
 
At least Mom knew there were two of us, but I knew she loved Jana best. She always asked Jana if she wanted to help her in the kitchen, always served her first, always asked about her day when we came home from school.
 
Always left me to fend for myself.
  Of course, it was my own fault, or so my therapist tells me. I could have met Daddy at the door alongside Jana, or asked Mom if I could help too. I could have spoken up and demanded attention. But I was too shy. I lacked the self confidence that would have allowed me to do those things.
 
They never took us out together. Whenever Mom went shopping, or had errands to run, she’d only take one of us. We never went out for meals, never went to the park. We had a swing set in the back yard, where I loved swinging with my sister, but I couldn’t tell you if we ever did this in public.
 
Why this was so, I never learned. My therapist likes to blame it on my Dad. He rarely acknowledged me, never came to any of my class functions. I don’t remember if he even came to my bedroom to kiss me goodnight, when I was young enough to want to be kissed goodnight.
 
We had separate bedrooms, so I don’t know if he ever kissed Jana goodnight either. Maybe he didn’t. I never asked.
 
Even in school they kept us apart. In grade school we had different teachers, in middle and high schools we had different classes, with different schedules. It was in high school that we started swapping places.
 
She would go to my social studies class and I would go to her history class. I had to pretend to be the class clown and she pretended to be a doormat. Jana thought it would be good for me, and I must admit, I did enjoy being her.
 
I just never learned to open up and let myself be gregarious and outspoken, though I had no problem with this when people thought I was Jana.
 
When Mom and Dad died in the car accident, two years after we graduated from high school, only Jana was named in their will. They left everything to her, the house, the stocks, the bank accounts. Even Dad’s 401k.
 
She promised to take care of me, and believe me, she has. But that doesn’t mean it didn’t hurt. It still does. It reinforces the idea that I don’t matter. Who cares that I exist?
 
Then Jana met Jonathan. They had a one night stand. She didn't plan to see him again, but then she discovered she was pregnant. I thought she should tell him. Didn’t he have a right to know he was going to be a father?
 
“Fine. But you tell him, Jenna. Pretend you’re me, like we used to do in school. Tell him you’re pregnant and see what he says.” We agreed not to tell him we’re twins, not to reveal the fact that there are two of us. 
 
I fell in love with Jonathan at first sight. He’s the tall, dark, handsome cliché; a wealthy, popular congressman. He said he was pleased to see me again, and we hit it off immediately, like two young lovers. My heart thrilled when he asked me to marry him.
 
And then it shattered, when I realized it wasn’t me he would marry.
 
Jana didn’t love him, but she married him anyway. They went to the Grand Caymans on honeymoon, leaving me behind in the childhood home that had been left to Jana.
 
A month later, Jana had a miscarriage and she left him. Jonathan was heartbroken, and I couldn’t bear to think of his unhappiness. I begged Jana to let me take her place, and she reluctantly agreed.
 
Jonathan lives with me now, in my childhood home, and “Jenna” went off to pursue a new career in computer forensics. 
 
Jonathan doesn’t even know she exists. She’s happy.  I’m happy. Happier than I’ve ever been before.
 
I was always jealous of Jana. But now, I no longer need to be.
 
Now, I am Jana.

The Haunting of Jonathan Haddock

Prompt: Misunderstood  | wordcount: 1800 words exactly  | deadline 12 August 2020


 


“Breaking news this morning,” the reporter announces as Jenna sips coffee at the kitchen table. She’s still groggy from sleep and slightly hungover from too much red wine the night before. 

  “The wife of Congressman Jonathan Haddock was discovered dead in her home last night, in what appears to be an accidental death, or possible suicide.”
 
A photo of Jenna’s sister displays on the television. Jenna jumps to her feet in shocked disbelief. “What? No! Oh my God! No!"
 
“According to Congressman Haddock, he found his wife at the bottom of the stairs with a broken neck. An empty bottle of sleeping pills left beside her bed, and a note that said, simply, 'goodbye.’" 
 
“No!” Jenna screams at the television. "No! Jana wouldn’t have done this.” Bereavement and anger war through her emotions as the screen fills with a video of Jonathan, his good looks marred by stricken grief.
 
“I just can’t believe she would do this. I thought she was happy. Why would she do this?”
 
The screen shifts to a picture of Jonathan and Jana on their wedding day.
 
“She didn’t do it, you bastard,” Jenna shouts, no longer hungover or groggy from sleep. “You did this, Jonathan. I know you did. You won’t get away with it.”
 
“According to the chief of police, there does not appear to be any foul play involved, and no investigation will be conducted. Mrs. Haddock has no living relatives, but will be dearly missed by her husband and friends.”
 
“No living relatives,” Jenna’s throat constricts, tears washing down her face. Jana was the only one left who knows that Jenna is her sister. It was their best kept secret, and now Jana will take it to her grave. Perhaps there are people from their childhood who might remember, but that was a long time ago, and far away, it’s unlikely to be remarked upon now.
 
The news program shifts to local weather, but Jenna has already tuned out, replaying the phone call she’d had with Jana two nights before. 
 
Jana had eavesdropped on a disturbing conversation earlier that day, where Jonathan’s Aide seemed to be attempting to blackmail the Congressman for embezzling money from grant funds.
 
“It’s possible I misunderstood, but it sure sounded like he was asking for a million dollars to keep him from reporting the theft. What if it’s true, and Jonathan used stolen money to pay for our vacation last month, or the diamond necklace he gave me? I sure as hell don’t want to be implicated in his crimes.” 
 
“Of course you don’t. Maybe you could find evidence, to protect yourself. I assume he has a computer at home? Does he keep it password protected, or are you able to access it?”
 
“Oh, never fear, I know all his passwords.”
 
“Ok, so here’s what you do…”  Jenna went on to give her some pointers on what to look for, how to find and copy relevant files without leaving any trace of the intrusion.
 
Jonathan must have caught her in the act.
 
Jenna’s heart aches at the thought of her sister, dead of a broken neck at her husband’s own hand. The bastard was not even suspected of foul play. She wouldn’t have thought him capable of murder.
 
Until now, she never thought herself capable of it either.

   
**
 
The hardwood floor is stained with Jana’s blood. It’s still there at the bottom of the steps where she died. Obviously, Jonathan made no attempt to clean it when he claimed to have “found her,” two weeks ago.
  
The house has a tomblike feel to it. Shuttered blinds darken the interior. Walls and floor radiate cold forbearance. Even the framed photos lining the entryway display only the stern, frowning faces of Jonathan’s parents and grandparents. The space where happier photos once hung are noticeably empty. Three pictures have been removed, only the nails remain. Bright rectangular patches amidst the more somber photos left in place.
 
Apparently, Jonathan wants no reminder of the woman he murdered. Ironic, since he left her blood to dry at the bottom of the stairs.
 
The house belongs to Jana, but Jenna knows it like the back of her own hand. She knows her sister never refinanced it, nor added Jonathan to the deed. How that must gall him, Jenna thought, in nasty satisfaction.
 
She hears the garage door start to open. The noise sends Jenna’s pulse racing with a rush of adrenalin as she looks around for a place to hide. It will not do for Jonathan to find her here.
 
She sprints into the living room and into the closet under the staircase. 
 
She moves silently into the cramped space. Finds the stick-on light on the far wall that she knows will emit a soft glow without being seen from outside the closed door. Pressing it on, she finds a spot to sit at the rear of the closet, makes herself comfortable, and settles in to wait.
 
Here are the pictures he had taken down from the entryway.
 
Jana, smiling that enigmatic smile on a beach at sunset. Jana and Jonathan on their wedding day. The one they’d used on the news, when they reported her death. Jana, with a child on her lap, a wistful look of longing on her face. 
 
It’s like looking into a mirror.
 
Or a memory. 
 
She remembers when she first met Jonathan. Remembers being attracted by his good looks, his sexy moves on the dance floor. Remembers going home with him and having mind blowing sex. The proverbial one night stand, from which she never expected to see him again.
 
She probably wouldn’t have, except she became pregnant. And her sister insisted that Jonathan had a right to know he was going to be a father.
 
She agreed, but only on the condition that her sister be the one to tell him of the baby.
 
They’d played this trick often enough when they were young. Pretending to be the other just to see if they’d be caught.
 
So they traded places for a night, like they’d done so often in their youth, promising not to reveal the existence of the other. Jonathan had no clue. He married Jana, they went on honeymoon, stayed together until Jana miscarried and then they separated.
 
Which should have been the end of the relationship, except by then, Jenna had fallen in love with Jonathan. And so Jenna became Jana.
 
And now Jana is dead. 
 
Waves of emotions wash over her. Grief, anger, loss. Revenge. Sitting here in this enclosed space, looking at the framed photos of herself and her identical twin sister, a plan starts to form in her head.
 
She stays in that cramped closet all afternoon, listening to him move through the house, watching news on TV, calling for Chinese takeout. It’s torture, smelling general chicken and fried rice while her stomach growls in hunger.
 
Finally, she hears running water through the pipes from the upstairs bathroom. Recalling his nightly rituals, she knows he will come back downstairs after showering, pour himself a shot of brandy, lock the front door and retire to his bedroom to sleep.
 
She also recalls how soundly he sleeps, and hopes having murder on his conscience will not have changed that for him. She counts on him sleeping like the dead.
 
Eventually, she lets herself out of the closet. She unsticks the light from the closet wall, tucks it into her shirt pocket. Wraithlike, she moves about the house, first helping herself to the leftovers. General chicken and fried rice isn’t as tasty cold, but she’s not brave enough yet to reheat it in the microwave.
 
She puts the containers back in the fridge, then wanders into the laundry room for some bleach and an old toothbrush. At the bottom of the stairs, she applies the bleach carefully, erasing just enough blood in the stain to form the word ‘goodbye’ with her fine handwriting.
 
In the master bathroom she finds her sister’s makeup and perfume, thankful he hasn’t thrown them out yet. She finds a few of Jana’s favorite dresses in the walk-in closet. Spritzes perfume towards Jonathan’s sleeping form on her way out before heading back downstairs.
 
She makes herself at home in the unused, forgotten bedroom in the basement. Another secret they’d kept from her husband. In the days that follow, she showers and eats when he leaves for the office, spiriting herself away before he returns, wearing Jana’s clothes and leaving the scent of perfume in her wake.
 
One night she writes ‘goodbye’ in red lipstick on the bathroom mirror while he sleeps, Another night she uses her finger to write on the inside shower door, so when the bathroom steams up he’ll see the word ‘goodbye’ appear as if written by a ghost.
 
She finds his stash of sleeping pills in his sock draw, crushes a few into the bottle of brandy to ensure he continues sleeping like the dead. Each night she adds a little more.
 
She hangs the framed photos of herself and her twin back in the entryway. Randomly moves things around. Whenever he turns the heater up she turns it back down, or opens a window to let a draught in.
 
She laughs in silent glee as he prowls the house, obviously not knowing what he’s looking for, but looking haggard and run down as the days progress and the haunting continues.
 
While he sleeps, she hacks into his computer. Using her computer forensics training, she uncovers the incriminating files he thinks are deleted. She places a recording device near the phone in his office, set to auto record each call, and knows the end is near when she plays back a call from earlier that day.
 
“What’s a million dollars to you, Jonathan? You syphoned off twenty million from a ninety million grant. No one needs to know, this will be our secret.”
 
On the call, Jonathan reluctantly agrees to meet him at the house the next day.
 
As Jonathan showers that night, Jenna forwards a copy of the recording, and the files she uncovered, to the police chief as well as the news anchor who reported Jana’s death. She crushes the remaining sleeping pills into the bottle of brandy, and makes one last stop on her way to the basement.
 
Presuming he will have trouble sleeping that night, Jonathan pours himself a full tumbler of brandy. Jenna is certain he will sleep like the dead.
 
Just before he goes to bed, Jonathan checks his safe. Gone is the account information to the bank in the Caymans. Gone the five million dollars in cash he keeps for easy spending. The only thing he finds in the safe is the familiar, haunting scent of Jana’s favorite perfume, and a note that said, simply, ‘goodbye.’

Dear John

Prompt 7: Red Lipstick | Word Count: 300 words exactly | Deadline: 15 July 2020

  Dear John by Peggy Rockey

  The handwriting on the envelop was hers. He recognized her sloppy penmanship, the green ink she favored. She’d kissed the envelop with red lipstick instead of adding a return address. It was the first letter she’d sent since they parted.

  He pressed his lips against the impression of hers, inhaling the scent of… paper?

  Where was the perfume she usually spritzed?

  Foreboding tore at his soul as he tore open the envelop, extracted the single page contained within.

  “Dear John,”

  Oh, hell no! She never started letters with “Dear John,” it was always “My sweet love,” or “My darling.” He didn’t want to read further, but did anyway.

  “It’s been so long since we’ve been together, I hardly remember what you look like, the sound of your voice, the feel of your arms around me. I know we had plans to be together, happy-ever-after and all that; but I just can’t go on like this, not knowing if I will ever see you again.

  “I’ve met someone, John. We’re going to be married.”

  The fucking bitch! Crumpling the letter, he threw it to the ground in a rage. Retrieved it a moment later and continued reading.

  “He’s a good man; he treats me well. Better than I deserve, I’m sure. What you and I had wasn’t real, we were living in a make-believe world. I know you maintain that I encouraged you to kill my husband, but of course I didn’t. The lawyers proved that, didn’t they? I certainly never thought you would actually do it, especially when I was filing for divorce.

  “Good bye, John. Have a good Life Without Parole.”

  She’d sealed the letter with a kiss, red lipstick smiling up at him where her signature should be, a mockery and a reminder of all he had lost.